Called Out c/p

iVillage Member
Registered: 01-21-2006
Called Out c/p
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Fri, 01-14-2011 - 9:39am

From the one line challenge.

iVillage Member
Registered: 06-13-1999
Sat, 01-15-2011 - 9:01am

Excellent job of show vs.. tell -- brava!

"It is with a strange malice / That I distort the world." -- from The Weeping Burgher by Wallace Stevens
iVillage Member
Registered: 01-21-2006
Mon, 01-17-2011 - 11:38pm

Thank you for your thought on that line.

iVillage Member
Registered: 01-21-2006
Tue, 01-18-2011 - 3:14pm

Not final, but getting there draft.