Gypsy #2 (poems for myself) c/p. please

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Gypsy #2 (poems for myself) c/p. please
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Wed, 11-17-2010 - 8:58pm

Gypsy #2

"It is with a strange malice / That I distort the world." -- from The Weeping Burgher by Wallace Stevens
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Registered: 01-28-2000
Wed, 11-17-2010 - 10:37pm

A long purr of approval from me.

iVillage Member
Registered: 06-13-1999
Thu, 11-18-2010 - 7:15am
TY! With the cat, the muse has returned. I've been writing non-stop.
"It is with a strange malice / That I distort the world." -- from The Weeping Burgher by Wallace Stevens
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Registered: 01-21-2006
Thu, 11-18-2010 - 9:27am

Love the visual stimuli I got from this!

iVillage Member
Registered: 06-13-1999
Thu, 11-18-2010 - 10:20am
Why thank you, my dear!
"It is with a strange malice / That I distort the world." -- from The Weeping Burgher by Wallace Stevens
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Registered: 03-19-2003
Thu, 11-18-2010 - 10:35am

Can I? You have some article overload. It's diminishing the punch that is the poem. Try this:

iVillage Member
Registered: 06-13-1999
Thu, 11-18-2010 - 11:38am

Of course you can and I'm glad you did.

"It is with a strange malice / That I distort the world." -- from The Weeping Burgher by Wallace Stevens