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| Thu, 11-22-2012 - 10:32am |
The News
Maeve has forgotten to ask
could she change.
She turns not to see the thresholds and warning charts.
It's cold in here.
When she shivers the back-slit pale gown floats.
To please a friend in school once
Maeve had bought pastel-flowered fabric
and sewed it too
to be twins. She always wanted to ask if
wearing it
did she too feel disappeared
but it was acoustic so she couldn't.
She inhales and sits up straight.
She glares at the kind blue fragile
soundproof walls.
What if I shout at what I hear
and gesticulate
and storm about,
will mauve-pink showers stifle me?
A light glitters.
Maeve looks up left.
That'll stop those flashes again.
But no.
Leaves flicker from tree pinnacles
far off at the end of the car park
and the flashes
don't
stop.
Out there, outside control,
leaves flicker and the wind blows.
Those leaves rustle
she says, and sways,
and lets them raise their gathering boom.
Maeve turns smiling
toward the opening door.
Jackie
Hi Jackie,
I don't understand what's really happening in this, or what has happened in the past. The last lines of St. 2 and the beginning of St. 3 ("She always wanted...soundproof walls") are the most confusing.
I also don't understand the significance of the title.
The part that I think I do understand sounds like an introduction to an interesting story.
I'm glad to read you here.
Roberta
Oh, oh, back to work. Thanks, Roberta!
I just took a walk on a rusty-gold fall afternoon. Everyone must have been indoors sleeping off their Thanksgiving dinners because it was just me and the leaves, and I loved it.
Jackie