Rain and Loneliness c/p

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Registered: 09-15-2003
Rain and Loneliness c/p
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Fri, 01-28-2011 - 8:42pm

Rain and Loneliness

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iVillage Member
Registered: 01-28-2000
Sun, 01-30-2011 - 9:29am

All this from a single opening line - wow!

Did you have this in mind when you possted the opening line in the January Challenge?

What flavour is the coffee?

iVillage Member
Registered: 07-15-2000
Sun, 01-30-2011 - 1:58pm
Oh Rae, I really like this and I'm with Roberta---what flavor is the coffee?

Poetry contains almost all you need to know about life

--Josephine Hart

iVillage Member
Registered: 09-15-2003
Sun, 01-30-2011 - 9:40pm

Thanks dear! I added the flavoring, hehe

iVillage Member
Registered: 09-15-2003
Sun, 01-30-2011 - 9:44pm

thanks Ro...

I didn't have this in mind, when I did the opening line. I was trying to get some poems from the openers and this one popped suddenly.

I added the flavouring! lol.

iVillage Member
Registered: 07-15-2000
Sun, 01-30-2011 - 11:25pm
Caramel, (my favorite) that would have been my guess!

Poetry contains almost all you need to know about life

--Josephine Hart

iVillage Member
Registered: 05-13-2000
Mon, 01-31-2011 - 10:02am
What a beauty. So nicely done, Rae. A bouquet of spring flowers to you.
Embrace change.
iVillage Member
Registered: 09-15-2003
Mon, 01-31-2011 - 7:26pm

Thanks Vae... How you doing?

iVillage Member
Registered: 06-13-1999
Tue, 02-01-2011 - 8:42pm
Awesome! Can "feel" lonliness and regret -- did I make the right decision, should I have ______ instead, etc.

L-O-V-I-N-G this one, Rae!
"It is with a strange malice / That I distort the world." -- from The Weeping Burgher by Wallace Stevens
iVillage Member
Registered: 09-15-2003
Tue, 02-01-2011 - 9:10pm

Thanks babe! I actually like this one myself, lol!

iVillage Member
Registered: 01-21-2006
Wed, 02-02-2011 - 11:50am
Mmmm, how many nights/days/nights have I had like this. And Carmel flavored coffee is always my true companion. Love this!

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