Hi Nikki and welcome to the board. Yes, you can post what you have in this section and ask for help. I'm not great at writing other than erotica, but I'll do what I can and I'm sure others will, too.
Hi Nikki and welcome! Your story sounds very intriguing; I hope you do share some of it with us! I'm just starting to dabble in writing myself, so I don't have loads of experience from the writing end of things.
I am new here as well. I am an avid reader. I studied classical literature at University. I would love to read your work and offer what I can to assist you in your writing.