Critique for my bio?

Community Leader
Registered: 04-05-2002
Critique for my bio?
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Thu, 09-08-2011 - 11:31am

I'd love some honest feedback on this, including whether it's so long it makes your eyes gloss over. This will go on the PT company site.






Community Leader
Registered: 04-05-2002
Mon, 09-12-2011 - 1:11pm

Can I FB message it to you?






Community Leader
Registered: 04-05-2002
Mon, 09-12-2011 - 1:10pm

Yikes, thanks for the catch on "people" and "you," I'm normally anal retentive about stuff like that.






iVillage Member
Registered: 03-15-2004
Mon, 09-12-2011 - 9:43am
Jean, if you still have my email address, feel free to email this to me and I'll be happy to edit it for you. :)
Community Leader
Registered: 09-25-2003
Mon, 09-12-2011 - 9:34am

Congraultions!

iVillage Member
Registered: 03-15-2004
Fri, 09-09-2011 - 11:17am
No, I hadn't heard about this. Good for you! I'm interested as to how you like it.
Community Leader
Registered: 04-05-2002
Fri, 09-09-2011 - 9:45am

I did!






iVillage Member
Registered: 03-15-2004
Thu, 09-08-2011 - 7:44pm
Did you accept a job!?!?!?! :)