What do you guys think of this poem?

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Registered: 09-30-2003
What do you guys think of this poem?
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Thu, 05-20-2004 - 4:05pm
Thoughts of loving you circulate my mind

Wishing and hoping someday to find

That you and I are somehow meant to be

Knowing that you and your heart are not free

Feelings of emptiness overtake my soul

And the absence of you is taking its toll

On my heart and my body that yearn for your touch

But I wait in a whisper for I love you so much

Day after day it is harder to bare

Though deep down inside I know that you care

It is hard for us both but don't know what to do

But to continue this love that our hearts hold so true


Sally

iVillage Member
Registered: 12-08-2003
Thu, 05-20-2004 - 4:20pm
Absolutely beautiful! It made me all chokey inside!! I think many if not all of us can relate to it!! Thanks for sharing!
iVillage Member
Registered: 03-25-2004
Thu, 05-20-2004 - 4:38pm
Love it! You so eloquently put pretty much everything I think about. Are you planning on sharing that with a certain someone??
iVillage Member
Registered: 09-30-2003
Thu, 05-20-2004 - 4:44pm
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Edited 10/1/2004 6:59 pm ET ET by sally289
iVillage Member
Registered: 09-30-2003
Thu, 05-27-2004 - 3:25pm
Bump :)
iVillage Member
Registered: 05-27-2004
Thu, 05-27-2004 - 4:00pm
Its wonderful! I am not a guy, but I think it good anyway...

madhouse

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Registered: 06-01-2004
Thu, 06-03-2004 - 1:10am
Sally I love it~ I'm sending to my MM right now!