After work dinner.

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alexod
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Registered: 10-10-2010
After work dinner.
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 Mon, 10-10-2011 - 3:10am

I know I shouldn't when I’m tired, but tonight I’m really craving you.

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alexod
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Registered: 10-10-2010
In reply to: alexod
Re: After work dinner.
 Mon, 10-10-2011 - 3:12am
I had to clean this up a bit for iVillage. If you want those harsh brutal, masculine words, then the original draft is at http://my-online-evil-twin.blogspot.com/2011/10/i-know-i-shouldnt-when-im-tired-but.html

Not promoting my blog, all content there is later republished here, but within ivillage guidelines.
nhgal2006
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Registered: 08-01-2006
In reply to: alexod
Re: After work dinner.
 Tue, 10-11-2011 - 10:40am

I liked this!



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alexod
iVillage Member
Registered: 10-10-2010
In reply to: alexod
Re: After work dinner.
 Tue, 10-11-2011 - 10:58am
It's hard to write rough and forbidden, but also maintaining respect and consent. Likewise keeping the language creative but coarse. I'm not that good at vulgar language, I feel it limiting, and at times childish.
nhgal2006
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Registered: 08-01-2006
In reply to: alexod
Re: After work dinner.
 Tue, 10-11-2011 - 9:26pm

Personally, I don't think you really need to write with a lot of swears and vulgarity. Sometimes just having great descriptions are enough. When it's good and I can imagine things happening it doesn't matter to me what kind of language is used.



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