The Eleventh Floor

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Registered: 01-27-2007
The Eleventh Floor
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Sat, 06-20-2009 - 6:47pm

I am standing at the window, looking out at a very dark but moonlit

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Registered: 12-06-2004
Mon, 06-22-2009 - 1:36pm

That was a fantastic plunge into wetness! You set the scene so well, then get right to the point.

"You take your hands and spread my bare folds open and make one slow lick" - hey, you had me at spread. ;-) Then, "...spread my bare folds open...", wow, you packed a lot of lust into those five words.

"...opening my legs to give you better access" - oh yes. Such a vividly erotic picture of body posture. Her: back against the window, hips rotated forward, knees bent, head sideways, craving pleasure. Him: Kneeling before her sex, spreading her open, delighted and aroused, wanting to experience her body the most intimate way possible.

"...my inner lips are being sucked into your mouth and your tongue teasing me at my opening" - wonderfully worded detail.

"I want more of your mouth on me and I move up closer to your face." - thank you for continuing the oral. Most stories move on too soon, but you just wanted to change positions, get over his face, get control of exactly where his tongue goes, and continue your pleasure.

"I can taste what you are feeling" - wow, love that.

"I feel the hot splash from your own passion deep inside me." - whew.

You have quite a way with words, very good at describing the visuals and the naughty little details.

Jake

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Registered: 01-16-2009
Mon, 06-22-2009 - 11:15pm

Hi Alexandria....


There is something very erotic about standing up that way

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