The trio/A lesson in patience

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Registered: 03-22-2008
The trio/A lesson in patience
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Fri, 01-30-2009 - 10:26pm

Ok well I'll try and get this rolling. If any of you read my short series, I've got a question. I've tried working on it... and have stalled.. Becca chose Miri and Drake. I started a new thread where they've moved in together, the beginning... but i'm wondering

1. if that's a good continuation, or
2. if I need to give some explanation of Becca's decision and how things are going to affect her life. OR ie, discussion with parents/family. she's 20 but can they understand.
3. if this should even be a continuation. was that thread enough?

thanks for any help

 

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Registered: 01-16-2009
Fri, 01-30-2009 - 11:41pm

Hi Killy....


I will offer an opinion...


2. if I need to give some explanation of Becca's decision and how things are going to affect her life. OR ie, discussion with parents/family. she's 20 but can they understand.


I think you can allow the reader to draw their own conclusion.....however Becca can address her own decision, in the form of thought,

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Registered: 03-22-2008
Sat, 01-31-2009 - 11:57am

Thanks MrsPe,

I hope this continues to build.
as far as the trio goes, i'm thinking of them all living under one roof. Since they've found their third. they want the trio to be together. maybe finding others to bring in and enjoy at times, but specifically they are together finding a new sense of harmony and structure

Killy