Tropical Paradise (Chapter Two)

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Tropical Paradise (Chapter Two)
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Wed, 10-08-2008 - 10:21am

Chapter 2

We enter the water and splash in the surf. Pausing to hold each other in a romantic embrace, we kiss and feel the salt from the water on our lips. The closeness of our bodies just feels right.

We break from our embrace and swim away, thus allowing the sensual moment to pass without further event. We both agree that the sensation of swimming in the warm tropical water is an experience we want to repeat as often as possible.

After returning to the towels wet and dripping we again settle down to absorb more sun and eventually fall asleep. We awake and turn over again to brown the other side.

Again we fall asleep in the afternoon sun and awake to take another mid afternoon swim. When finished, we return to the towels to watch the slowly setting sun. As we watch the orange ball disappear into the horizon you place a hand on my chest. I in turn reach for your right shoulder and gently trace circles around the edge. Your hand moves to my neck, just below my ear. You make such sweet, soft strokes. We sit in this initial stage of mutual pleasure until daylight becomes darkness. We gather our belongings and wrap the bath robes around us for the walk from the beach to our room.

Upon entering the room the robes immediately come off and we survey each other’s bodies for the amount of sun we got today. You lower the waistband on your swimsuit bottom to reveal the stark contrast of your tan to the unexposed areas. "I didn't want tan lines on this trip," I heard you mumble as you smile up at me with a gleam in your eyes. You turn to face the large Jacuzzi tub and start to fill it with hot water. I watch as you lean into the streaming water to test its temperature.

You rise up from the edge of the tub and place one and then the other foot in the water. You turn to me and beckon me to join you. I walk across the bathroom to the tub and get in as you lean back into the hot, steamy water.

You extend your arms out to allow me to lean back into your chest. As you reach your arms around my chest you place your legs around my waist and thighs. I gently rub your feet as you massage my chest.

You gaze up at me and smile. We bend our heads toward each other and softly kiss. It isn’t a kiss of passion so much as it is a kiss of satisfaction. We hold each other in a sweet embrace as the water continues to swirl around us.

Throughout the course of this romantic embrace we remain relaxed and slowly drift off to sleep. We have no idea how long we've been in the water but it still remains warm.

You release me from the caress of your arms and gently push me forward. You slowly rise as do I.

I step out of the tub and take your hand and help you out to a waiting soft rug on the bathroom floor. I then place a large fluffy towel around your back and pull you to me for a kiss.

I take the towel and cover your entire body with gentle pats until you are dry. You return the favor to me and we move from the bathroom to the bed where candles are lit and body lotion is waiting on the nightstand.

...continued in Chapter 3

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Wed, 10-08-2008 - 1:43pm

This is going really good. I like the detail, so easy to picture happening.


A few off-thread questions for you. What kind of romance books do you like, authors? Of course you've favorite place on iVillage would be here "Fantasies", followed by some of the other Love boards. Check 'em out. I really, really, really, think you should tell us about this unique talent you have. Just whisper it to me, no one will eavesdrop.


Is that really you in your avatar?

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Wed, 10-08-2008 - 1:45pm

Oh, it's me again. I forgot to say, you might want to continue the rest of the story in this one thread. It makes it easier if someone comes along later. They won't have to actually search for it. Just a friendly suggestion...


MWAH

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Wed, 10-08-2008 - 3:33pm

Thanks for the kind words on my "Tropical Paradise."

In response to your off-thread questions...I haven't read many romance books and wouldn't know any of the authors. I wrote a romance story on a dare from some older ladies in a group that met at a library in my hometown. I thought I had done the story and characters justice until they said it wasn't spicy enough. They let me read some lines from one of their favorite books and man oh man were my eyes opened. That's why I asked earlier on this site what words were appropriate to use. There were words, actions and scenes in the book they let me read that were xxx rated for sure. Needles to say, I went back to edit my story and now I have a PG-13 version to go with the R or X.

Please tell me more about the other boards you think I should check out. I just signed up on this site yesterday.

As for the "unique talent" as you phrased it. I don't see a place on here to whisper it to you without listening devices picking it up...lol

And sadly...yes, it's actually me as the avatar?

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Wed, 10-08-2008 - 3:34pm
Should I go ahead and paste Chapter two in here now? I have Chapter 3 waiting to launch.
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Thu, 10-09-2008 - 8:17am
I see you posted Chapter two with Chapter one, so put Chapter 3 there... lol

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Thu, 10-09-2008 - 8:23am

As far as other boards, it all depends on you. Most of us bounce all over the place and have made some great friends. The folks on all the boards are really great and welcoming.


I liked your avatar. Do you have blue eyes? In this new one, are you sunbathing nude!


As for the story you wrote, is



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Thu, 10-09-2008 - 8:44am

As far as other boards, it all depends on you. Most of us bounce all over the place and have made some great friends. The folks on all the boards are really great and welcoming. (Thanks, I'll look around in here)

I liked your avatar. Do you have blue eyes? In this new one, are you sunbathing nude! (Thanks for the compliment on the avatar. And the answer to your two questions are yes and yes. Maybe I should take the sunbathing one off and put the original back. Or perhaps even a animated one that isn't me.)

As for the story you wrote, is the original something that you can post here? (Yes)

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Thu, 10-09-2008 - 9:42am

If it means anything... I like this avatar or the first one...


I saw that you made your way to another board. Keep it up!

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Thu, 10-09-2008 - 9:49am
Thanks.



Edited 10/9/2008 10:12 am ET by sacrificefly