A Warm Night on the Patio

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A Warm Night on the Patio
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Sun, 07-12-2009 - 2:26pm
It's a warm night. I am outside on the patio, wearing

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Sun, 07-12-2009 - 7:50pm
That's excellent!
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Mon, 07-13-2009 - 7:48am
I loved this!


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Mon, 07-13-2009 - 12:10pm

Another smoking hot story of passion aroused, explored, intensified, and satisfied.

I love the words he speaks, telling her exactly what he wants in so few words.

"You say....open your legs more...and I spread them wide for you." - oh, thank you so very much.

"You say....spread your lips for me." - I really enjoy how he says what he wants and it seems to be just what she wants to do for him, and for herself, at that moment.

"I let it's weight settle in my hand..." - nice paragraph, that one. Especially because it mirrored an experience I had Saturday evening almost precisely.

"my fingers slip in and out of me so easily while I suck you." - I can almost literally feel those words on my fingers. And elsewhere.

"I watch you lay the head of your member against my opening." - I really like how they both watch that. The way he spends some time there, both watching, both enjoying the feel and the look of her wetness against his hardness, that is very exciting.

"you slip your hands underneath me and pull my hips into you as you thrust yourself inside me." - Now THAT is an entrance. Wow.

"devoured by each thrust" - raw animal lust, that.

"With your member inside me you spread open my lips and press your thumb to my clit." - Whew.

"As I feel my spasms inside, your hardness is caught and squeezed" - That is an incredible feeling. He can feel her orgasm from the grip around his base, to the throbbing pressure pushing down from her clit onto the middle of his shaft, all the way to her deepest insides dancing and fluttering around his head. All perfectly designed by nature to draw his seed into her at that exact moment.

"I pull my legs up and lay flat..." - yes, get him as deep as possible.

"I feel the last strokes before I feel your hot fluids empty into me." - as if he could do anything else at that point.

"when it starts I tell you I feel you..." - Wow, she feels his fluids, that's hot. She tells him she feels it, that is hottest.

A great, squirm-inducing read, as always.
Jake

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Registered: 01-27-2007
Sat, 07-18-2009 - 8:48pm

Thank you!


The feeling is definitely mutual.

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Registered: 01-27-2007
Sat, 07-18-2009 - 8:53pm

A great, squirm-inducing read, as always.


That's high praise! Thank you,


Taking the individual thoughts and commenting is very, very helpful. It confirms that you "got" the picture I tried to create and I appreciate that.

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Registered: 01-16-2009
Sun, 07-26-2009 - 12:00am

I find myself so caught up in the action...the pace is perfect.


Your erotic descriptions take us right along with you.....

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