Asking a favor....
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Asking a favor....
| Fri, 02-03-2006 - 2:54pm |
Would some of you check out my profile on match and let me know what you think?
| Fri, 02-03-2006 - 2:54pm |
Would some of you check out my profile on match and let me know what you think?
Your profile is pretty good actually.
"Let's see...I have lived in Columbus for almost 6 years (this time). I went to college in PA and move to MI for a year of grad school before moving to Columbus then to Texas for 18 months."
I'd eliminate the "Let's See" and I would come up with something a little snazzier for the intro like: My season tickets to MSU football games are the nearest thing to my heart!"
"I am a bankruptcy paralegal, but I don't let that define me."
You are almost apologizing for your job, tell people you love what you do.
"I love animals, hence my volunteer work at the Humane Society. I love to read and hang out. While I love my friends, big loud clubs don't do it for me."
When you do your Humane Society volunteer work, what do you do? What do you do with your friends?
"I live alone, own my own home, work hard, play hard and work to live (not the other way around)."
Good, when you say play hard what do you mean? You mentioned you exercise.
"I am always open for an adventure - a day trip out of town or just driving around looking for something interesting."
Adventure where? Doing what? Antiques? Art? Mountains? Water? Shopping?
"I went to a division III college, but I root for the Big Ten (it is family tradition). A big MSU fan - which usually doesn't get me in too much trouble here in Columbus."
Good.
"I am looking for someone who can hold up their end of the conversation and enjoys a good laugh. Interested yet???"
That includes just about everyone, conversation about what?
Please note that you have started every single sentence with "I", you might want to change that up.
I like the fact that you are smiling in that profile picture but that outfit isn't exactly showcasing what you have to offer. How about a nice picture of you at one of those MSU games rooting for your team? A picture in sunny outdoors (most of your pics seem to be inside)?
The picture of your niece implies you have a child, you can either make a comment in your profile about who the child is or delete the picture.
Thanks.