Is this better?

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Registered: 01-02-2004
Is this better?
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Wed, 04-05-2006 - 9:50am

I already paid so I might as well try. I reworked some things. Is this better?

About me and what I'm looking for
So here it is the bare bones, this is who I am and what I want. So me, I'm hardworking, loyal(if I like you, I'll always have your back), I suck at lying so I don't bother doing that, faithful and not whiny. I am able to take care of myself (meaning I can change my car's oil, tune it up, drive a motorcycle, fix a fence and any other minor house type repairs), but I also know when to ask for help and or muscle if needed. I am definitely not afraid to break a nail or get dirty. I have a really wicked sense of humor and love guys I can joke and kid with. Recently, a male friend of mine said how much he like to sing in his pink thong. So I got him a spare one and wrapped it in a Victoria's Secret bag. He's threatening to actually wear it, which is a site no one wants to see. I like to laugh till I snort and like to be the first to crack a joke. I have a toddler son, who is my little boy and loves riding my horses with me.

Okay, I'm looking for a guy who is hardworking, has a job that he attends regularly, and knows how to operate a washing machine without supervision. And if you are home before your partner I like a guy who can start dinner. I like to ride motorcycles and horses and cars (ford mustang girl/Dodge truck fan). I know who Billy Lane is and I have met Indian Larry before he died in Daytona none the less. I really miss riding motorcycles with someone and having no plans just going. I have two horses that I own, train and show. You don't have to be into everything I am, I expect anyone I date to be confident in himself and have his own interests that he likes. Apparance wise, I like guys at least taller than me. Otherwise, you spend the whole evening looking at my chest and that's just not cool.

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Registered: 03-16-2006
Wed, 04-05-2006 - 10:25am

I think it's much better - I like the story you

heather 5-18-10
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Registered: 03-26-2003
Wed, 04-05-2006 - 12:12pm

It's better, for sure...I would take out the last two lines though (about height and looking at your chest...I still think that comes across as negative, and it's unnecessary because you can put the height you want in a guy in your match section).