Discuss: good first emails
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Discuss: good first emails
| Thu, 04-21-2005 - 10:04am |
I was going to put this example in response to CB but I didn't want to hijack her thread...
| Thu, 04-21-2005 - 10:04am |
I was going to put this example in response to CB but I didn't want to hijack her thread...
I agree!
You know what I think makes it especially weak?
Excellent tips. I'd add that mixing in a little confidence with your note helps, too.
For example, here's a section of my current gf's first note to me (she initiated contact!):
"I am hoping to find someone special in a selective way and would love to get an opportunity to know a little more about you.
"If you are curious enough, than reply to this e-mail and you'll not be sorry :)"
How could I resist emailing her back? :) And she's right... I've not been sorry. :)
Best wishes,
J
Hi phoenixmama!
cl-pianoguy thinks all your points are excellent....THUMBS UP!
As you know....it's easier for some people to express themselves than it is for others.