Please help me with my profile

iVillage Member
Registered: 03-25-2003
Please help me with my profile
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Sun, 02-05-2006 - 9:22am

I'm putting my profile up again. I think I sound too demanding and stupid... please give me some suggestions. Thanks.

Head line: Sweet & sassy girl exploring RSVP for a gentleman with "4 Cs" (spot the 4Cs inside my profile!)

Interests:
Music: Music is me! If I say too much I'll give away too much and you know, that's not fun! I would listen to anything, but what music do I really like? Ooh, that's for you to find out!

Reading: Give me something with action, mystery and suspense!! Ok, Michael Crichton and Dan Brown will do for now. I like trashy magazines- I appreciate their creativity to write imaginative facts about various celebs who fancy themselves as celebs, they make me laugh!

Movies: You won't regret taking me to the movies cos I love "guys movies": action, thrillers and adventures (no horrors). I love James Bond. Thomas Crown Affairs is my favourite. I will spare you the chick flicks and see them with my own girl friends (but you're most welcome to come with me!)

Sport: I used to glide on ice and I used to hit some balls with a racket (no pun intended). Now I glide on water and and I smash..... Naw, I keep fit with dance.
Other interests: Cooking, ballet, salsa (just a beginner), going outdoors, relaxing at home. Oh and maybe taking up some of your hobbies!

Main text:

I am witty, I am blonde; I am elegant, I am down to earth; I am funny, I am serious. Confused? Don't be. I'm just many things fused into one!

I look like a ballarina, minus the anorexic part- I like fine food & wine, seafood, I love Japanese and French. But as long as the company is great, take away pizza and TV (and some cuddles!!) are just as good.

I love a good laugh and doing things together with people I like- it can be something crazy or something boring, I can still have fun!

I'm very independent, but then again, I like to be looked after... (that's so you could show off your gentlemanly instinct!)

Woo me with flowers, entrance me with a romantic candle-lit dinner... why don't you drop me a line? Don't forget to include your pic, but if you send me one with sunglasses I'll send you one with sunglasses too!

Ideal partner:

I'd love to meet a gentleman who is Classy, Competent, Confident and Cultured. No permanent tattoos, ear or body rings please. Heterosexual and male since birth. Oh and if you're blonde with blue eyes, short hair, clean shave and wear a suit I'm already melting. So did you spot the 4Cs?

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iVillage Member
Registered: 08-10-2005
Mon, 02-06-2006 - 12:33pm
getting closer but I agree with the other poster too generic. Tonight or tomorrow I will have time and I will take another stabb at it for you. Also I hope you are posting at least one pic?
iVillage Member
Registered: 03-25-2003
Mon, 02-06-2006 - 3:35pm

there's already a section where they have a drop down menu for things like what age, race, religion, children etc for yourself or your ideal partner. Photos are either displayed or hidden but if hidden then you include your password when you send you kisses, so you send your password and not pic. same diff.

I don't want to say what music I'm into. I guess I'm just cynical about music.

iVillage Member
Registered: 04-14-2003
Mon, 02-06-2006 - 4:40pm
You don't have to say what music that you enjoy, leave that section blank.
iVillage Member
Registered: 10-17-2002
Mon, 02-06-2006 - 4:59pm
OK, if you're unwilling to say what types of music you're into (I'm not sure I get that since you are SO into music - I would think it is important enough to make it a highlight of your profile), then go back to the original fun but coy text rather than the boring but coy text. Or how about something like "I am always up for a concert on the weekends - it doesn't matter who's playing! I love to hear anyone from your beginning garage band to Mozart" )of course only if you do). Or "My CD collection is all over the board but if you want to find out what my favorites are, you'll have to ask!"


Edited 2/6/2006 5:20 pm ET by vexer_hw

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iVillage Member
Registered: 08-10-2005
Mon, 02-06-2006 - 11:41pm

ok I played with your profile.....use what you like...

Head line: Classy, Competent, Confident and Cultured

Main text:

I am witty, elegant,down to earth, funny, and serious. Confused? Don't be. I'm just many things fused into one!

I’m an adventurous and adaptable kind of girl. I love a good laugh and doing things together with people I like - it can be something crazy or something boring, I can still have fun!

I love fine food and wine, I have a soft spot for French and Japanese cuisine.

Why don't you drop me a line? Don't forget to include your pic, but if you send me one with sunglasses I'll send you one with sunglasses too!

Interests:
Music: Music is me! I would listen to anything, but what music do I really like? Ooh, that's for you to find out. My I-pod is full, but no you can't borrow it!

Reading: Give me something with action, mystery and suspense!! Ok, Michael Crichton and Dan Brown will do for now. I like magazines- I appreciate their creativity to write imaginative facts about various celebs who fancy themselves as celebs, they make me laugh!

Movies: You won't regret taking me to the movies, I love "guys movies": action, thrillers and adventures (no horrors). I love James Bond. Thomas Crown Affair is my favorite. I will spare you the chick flicks and see them with my own girl friends (but you're most welcome to come with me!)

Sport: I used to glide on ice but I hung up my skates. Been thinking about playing hockey. I keep fit with dance. I love ballet and I am learning salsa at the moment.

Other interests: Cooking, ballet, salsa (just a beginner), relaxing at home and always up for new adventures... Might even give your hobbies a try!

Ideal partner:
A stylish and intelligent gentleman with a clean shave and wears a suit. Confident and classy. No tattoos and piercings.

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