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| Fri, 04-07-2006 - 9:57pm |
Hey everyone. I finally got the courage to put up a profile on match.com. I have had a few responses, but nothing compared to the amount of views I have had. I had over 200 views but only like 7 reponses. I have a pic up there and I have worked on my profile and I was wondering if you can take a look at it and tell me if I should make any changes. Its funny, I am in Marketing and write all the time, when it came to this I felt like I was 5 years old. Thanks for your help.
Wendy
Here it is:
I love to laugh, and it's not too hard to get me going (I am a great audience, so if you need a confidence booster, I'm your girl! :)) I would not say I am a comedian, but I have my moments, sometimes witty, sometimes saracastic. ;). But I should tell you now I can be a little bit cheesy and a goofball. Oh and yes, I do dance around while getting dressed for work.:) I also try not to take myself to seriously and will let loose and have a good time. I can definitely be young at heart.:)
I have a lot of interests and can be spontaneous at times. Like everyone else, I can jump in the car and take off for the weekend, but for me it is not jumping in the car, it is where you are willing to go after you jump in the car. I am usually up for anything. I will try almost anything once and if I like it, I will try it twice;). I can be laid back, stay home get into comfy clothes, curl up on the couch and pop in a dvd. I can be a bit of a hopeless romantic and love those type of settings. Being creative, shows thought and that is romantic.
I consider myself a strong-minded intelligent woman. I am currently getting my MBA in Marketing. I'm not seeking someone who is a brain surgeon or anything, but an intelligent conversation is always nice :).
I am looking for someone who is ambitious, strong-willed, yet is able to compromise and communicate. Trust, loyalty and respect, need I say more? Someone who can make the most out of life and make me laugh. I believe it's important to spend time with your friends and family. Oh, it is quite all right if you are a sports nut. ;) I just want someone that will show me the same respect and support, and include me in their life. I want someone I can be best friends with. Someone that is considerate of others and is not selfish is key for me. I also appreciate someone who does not have to have others approval, and just knows how to be themselves, as well as someone who knows what they want and goes after it.

I think your profile is fine, just spends too much time on the same thing in places.
Thank you so much for your advice and help. I had no problems with you editing it. That actually helped a lot. I really appreciate it.
Wendy