Profile Example

iVillage Member
Registered: 05-16-2004
Profile Example
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Wed, 06-15-2005 - 5:25am

Just stumbled on this - she isn't a match for me but look how well she's used specifics in her text:


iVillage Member
Registered: 03-12-2005
In reply to: lg1964
Wed, 06-15-2005 - 6:22am
This is a very well written profile.... the only thing I dont care for is the redundancy... certain facts that are mentioned in the body of the essay will be brought out in other parts of the profile... eg. green eyed, red hair, certain interests, etc.... eliminating this would therefore make the essay a little shorter and more likely to be read... I dont know about the rest of you but...eventhough I am a fan of reading, I dont like reading profiles that carry on for too long...
iVillage Member
Registered: 05-16-2004
In reply to: lg1964
Wed, 06-15-2005 - 6:28am
I agree that it can use some "trimming". I tend to like profiles that contain enough specifics so that you can decide if you'd be a match or not.
iVillage Member
Registered: 08-19-2004
In reply to: lg1964
Wed, 06-15-2005 - 9:37am
I agree it's well-written but I'm also not a fan of too-long profiles. I find myself skimming and I think men are even worse when it comes to actually reading the whole thing (in fact several men have told me they don't read them at all).