What are your thoughts...

iVillage Member
Registered: 03-19-2003
What are your thoughts...
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Tue, 10-14-2003 - 11:33am

Ok, many of us have online ads and they are very different. I will post one I have had for about 2 yrs on loveaccess.com. Give me any questions comments maybe we can help another on this. There ads are very simple so the bottom half is where you have to go. I do have a picture, well about 3 posted. But I have gotten some great responses. The friend I met in Florida earlier this year I met him there when I first joined dated another guy I met there oh two. So man potentials just distance isn't for me. But, hey lets give this a go and see what could be changed, ways it may come across to others. etc...


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iVillage Member
Registered: 09-30-2003
Tue, 10-14-2003 - 4:34pm
I think it looks Great! Just remove the paragraph that repeats itself (same one in about what you are looking for.)

If you have a good sense of humor, try to let your hair down a bit and ad some light hearted humor.

iVillage Member
Registered: 07-05-2003
Wed, 10-15-2003 - 7:32pm
In the "about me" section you actually spend more time describing what you're looking for than who you are. And then you repeat this info in the next section.

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This whole paragraph is in both sections. (Mmm...there's also a typo - the word "remember")

When you write about yourself, describe what you enjoy doing in your spare time. How you spend your time speaks volumes about your personality. Scuba diving, parasailing, backpacking etc. conveys one image. Reading, attending charity events, volunteering at a shelter conveys a very different image.

Hopefully you don't mind my 2 cents. :-)

jhoover

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Registered: 03-19-2003
Wed, 10-15-2003 - 11:31pm

No, I don't mind at all. I am hoping with mine someone else can gage their own or maybe even ask questions. I am ok with it all as I am not looking any more really but still try to see. Plus it is a lifetime membrship so it is always there.


Thanks for the comments......


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iVillage Member
Registered: 03-26-2003
Sat, 10-25-2003 - 9:06pm
Hi Marie, I'm just jumping in here to say hello. With the exception of the comment already mentioned about the duplication, I think it's a very good ad. You sound like a wonderful person and I'm sure you will make the right connection when the time is right. You might remember that I met my husband on line in 1999, married him in 2001 and we've lived happily ever after. He is the only man I ever met online and I wasn't looking for a cyberconnection at the time, we just accidentally met on icq to chat as friends. And the rest is history.

I haven't been here in such a long time; my husband encouraged me to finish my education and I will finally graduate college with my BS in Business Management in June 2004 at the ripe old age of 47 --- well, better late than never. So, I rarely get online anymore except to do homework.

If you ever want to chat, email me at joy81499@hotmail.com.

Joy