Need Support... Big Time.....

iVillage Member
Registered: 11-01-2003
Need Support... Big Time.....
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Fri, 11-14-2003 - 8:44pm
Hi Everyone,

I am in need of major support. My Doctor has been after me to find something and now with feeling better, I have decided to try to start my floral business I have been having some major anxiety attacks today. Must remember to breath, anyway, could you all go and look at the website that I have built and tell me want you think???? In addition, muscl66 you said you would be please spell check for me?? You said that you would be my spell checker. Please tell me what you all think? http://pages.ivillage.com/rainydaysargon/

Thank you to all, got to remember to breath, just too nervous.

Warm Regards,

RainydaysArgon

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Registered: 05-06-2007
Fri, 11-14-2003 - 9:06pm
LOL...just breathe....lol.

I thought the site was great. I certainly am not a web designer, however I am a consumer, if that's any help. I am not sure, but I think the ladybug is next to the lily in the upper right hand corner. My preference is the cascade. I had a hand bouquet (?if I spelled that correct) at my senior prom in high school. I will always remember that, because EVERYONE else had corsages....hehe. I was the envy of the others....lol, or at least my flowers were.

Enjoy your new business.

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Registered: 04-07-2003
Fri, 11-14-2003 - 9:33pm

(((((((((((((((((((((((((((Diana))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

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Registered: 11-06-2003
Fri, 11-14-2003 - 9:35pm
Rainy,

The only thing I picked up on was one possible typo.

"Have you special day...."

Should "you" be "your"? Other than that, everything looked good to me. Good luck with your business.

(((((((((Rainy)))))))))

Peace, Love & Light,

Traci

~ ML ~  

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Registered: 11-06-2003
Fri, 11-14-2003 - 9:39pm
Rainy,

By the way, I forgot to remind you about the water. Deep breaths, lots of water. You will do fine. I wish you the best of luck.

Traci

~ ML ~  

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Registered: 03-27-2003
Fri, 11-14-2003 - 11:49pm
It looks great...the pictures are really nice. Being the daughter of an English teacher, I did find a few very minor typos, though most everything looked good to me. I'm not sure how I can best tell you where the typos are, but here is what I found, with the corrections in capital letters:

On Home Page: Have YOUR special day ENHANCED with the...

On Styles of Silk Flowers Continued: Pomander: This bouquet is best DESCRIBED...

On Silk Flower Alter Arrangements: title should be ALTAR instead of alter

On How to Choose and Build: Filler flowers: Filler flowers are small flowers that COMPLEMENT the focal flowers.

On The Ladybug Line: Why not carry one down the AISLE with you? Also, intrigue your GUESTS by having them...

On About Ordering and Pricing: change alter to ALTAR...also, the information that will be needed IS (or includes)...also, alternate flowers if first CHOICE is not found

Photo Gallery: just one thing: change alter to ALTAR again...

Sorry, guess this looks like a lot, really I think your site looks good overall...just wanted to give you all the info I know to fix any typos...

Hope this helps,

Rose

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Registered: 03-27-2003
Fri, 11-14-2003 - 11:51pm
Oops, one more that I didn't see until just now: on Photo Gallery page, "The flowers were beautiful, FROM (instead of form)...

Deep breaths, you'll be fine!

Rose

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Registered: 11-01-2003
Sat, 11-15-2003 - 1:03am
Hi,

Thank you for your thoughts and I bet you were the envy on prom night. Your are correct the Ladybug is up above the lily on the green leaf.

Warmest Regards,

RainydaysArgon

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Registered: 11-01-2003
Sat, 11-15-2003 - 1:13am
Hi Rose,

Thank you, it may look like a lot but I want it to look good, that is why I ask for you all to look. Sometimes we need an other pair of eyes. So again Thank you!! I am so nervous that I will probably faint if anyone contacts me!!

Hey how are you doing?

Warmest Regards,

RainydaysArgon

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Registered: 11-01-2003
Sat, 11-15-2003 - 1:22am
Hi Traci,

Thank you for the help and the advise about the water. How soon we forget!!!! Well, building this website keep me busy for a while now I an just so nervous that I just know I will faint if someone really does contact me! But thank you again for being here.

I read your post yesterday and I know you have your hands full, but do you think that maybe you could share one or several of your funny stories with us. I think we all need a good laught right now or just some warm feelings.

Warmest Regards,

RainydaysArgon

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Registered: 11-01-2003
Sat, 11-15-2003 - 1:29am
Hi,

Thank you, you have alway been here to give me good advise and support. I am sorry that it hurts so much to look at the memories but I can understand!! Thank you again.

Warmest Regards,

RainydaysArgon

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