24 Years c/p repost
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24 Years c/p repost
24 Years
On this day 24 years ago You got out of bed To a day of August sunshine
Said good bye To friends and family You had visited on the weekend
Climbed into your car And started the 5 hour drive Back to your home
It had been a special trip this weekend High school sweethearts got married Got to see all your high school buddies again
But the weekend is over Back to work tomorrow And the routine of daily life
Something happened though About 1 ½ hours from home We will never know exactly what
Only that everything just stopped for you One second you’re okay The next second dead
No more seeing, talking, No more touching, hearing No more heart beating
No more funny jokes No more wonderful smile No more warm hugs
No more teasing No more laughing No more singing to me
No more letters No more caring As only a big brother can do
Who could have ever known Who would have ever even guessed What that day would bring
That it would be a day of ‘lasts’ Last morning to get out of bed Last meal to eat
Last time you waved at a neighbor Last time you spoke with someone Last drive you took
Last smile you gave Last song you sang Last time your eyes sparkled
That the day would start out normal And end normal - for others But end your life completely
And though you are not here You will always be In my memories And in my heart
August 28,2002
Hello & Welcome Jammianne! I read through your poem quickly! (m)
This is definitely a tribute poem.
I don't want to give a gentle crit=g/c as of yet `cause I want to take my time and read through it when I have the proper time to give it the attention it deserves.
by tomorrow morning- you'll see my post.
Maggie.
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