You're really going to hate this ... what's the story?
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I am re-reading my story now, b/c no one event stands out over the other, (which is what you are noticing just from my query) i.e. - one problem bigger than the other that needs to be resolved - , so my query is incomplete. And I changed my format so I know the first half is sort of different than the second half - and once I decide what the problem is and edit my story to reflect that I think the rest of the query will come together.
This might show more of the "story"
God speaks to Alivia Less. Her email dings daily with a nugget of wisdom that inexplicably applies to her day. Even her mother’s t-shirts spout messages from God. But her boss puts an end to her religiously based ad campaigns making it hard for her
An agent just posted this blog entry on Plots that might be worth looking at.