Take Ten LOL

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Take Ten LOL
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Sun, 06-15-2008 - 1:21am

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Mon, 06-16-2008 - 6:44am

You're really going to hate this ... what's the story?

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Mon, 06-16-2008 - 10:49am

I am re-reading my story now, b/c no one event stands out over the other, (which is what you are noticing just from my query) i.e. - one problem bigger than the other that needs to be resolved - , so my query is incomplete. And I changed my format so I know the first half is sort of different than the second half - and once I decide what the problem is and edit my story to reflect that I think the rest of the query will come together.


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Mon, 06-16-2008 - 12:16pm

This might show more of the "story"


God speaks to Alivia Less. Her email dings daily with a nugget of wisdom that inexplicably applies to her day. Even her mother’s t-shirts spout messages from God. But her boss puts an end to her religiously based ad campaigns making it hard for her

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Thu, 06-19-2008 - 6:18pm

An agent just posted this blog entry on Plots that might be worth looking at.

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