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| Tue, 11-06-2001 - 9:32am |
Tiny Tuesday (m)
Over the next five weeks, let's concentrate on using our five senses to help us improve our writing.
This week, try to write a short story that focuses on sight/eyes.
I can't wait to SEE what you come up with. Happy writing,
Mac

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Thanks mac.(n/t)
cl-ozarker
"We are all apprentices in a craft where no one ever becomes a master." - Ernest Heminway
Heheheh, dancing and all, huh? Thanks maria.(n/t)
cl-ozarker
"We are all apprentices in a craft where no one ever becomes a master." - Ernest Heminway
Had me giggling out loud. . . .
It was a cute story and I can remember a friend doing something similar to me, but I was a lot older. I thought I should mention that you had a POV change in there with the doctor. Over all a great story.
dvspec
Left me smiling. I liked this. n/t
Thanks dvspec (m)
I've been experimenting with writing in different POVs (I used to always write in 1st only). So I'm glad you pointed that out.
Mac
Very Well Done, Maria. I love the way you gave the character...
such a real voice - I wondered if his ability to think made a part of his cloning error.
You did great with this one!
Wendy
Hee hee! I loved the little conspiracy here! This was very cute, Mac. (n/t)
Your descriptions are so vivid and true - yet so lyrical, too. Great job, Linda! (n/t)
Hiya Wendy
The child was a cloning error because his fingers were an eighth of an inch too short. I didn't include it because it sounds so mean!
thanks for reading and the feedback
maria
Thanks Wendy....glad you liked it! (nt)
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