Tiny Tuesday (m)

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Tue, 11-06-2001 - 9:32am

Tiny Tuesday (m)


Over the next five weeks, let's concentrate on using our five senses to help us improve our writing.

This week, try to write a short story that focuses on sight/eyes.

I can't wait to SEE what you come up with. Happy writing,

Mac

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Wed, 11-07-2001 - 10:13pm

Thanks mac.(n/t)


cl-ozarker

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Wed, 11-07-2001 - 10:20pm

Heheheh, dancing and all, huh? Thanks maria.(n/t)


cl-ozarker

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Thu, 11-08-2001 - 7:56pm

Had me giggling out loud. . . .


It was a cute story and I can remember a friend doing something similar to me, but I was a lot older. I thought I should mention that you had a POV change in there with the doctor. Over all a great story.

dvspec

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Thu, 11-08-2001 - 8:06pm

Left me smiling. I liked this. n/t


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Thu, 11-08-2001 - 9:20pm

Thanks dvspec (m)


I've been experimenting with writing in different POVs (I used to always write in 1st only). So I'm glad you pointed that out.

Mac

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Fri, 11-09-2001 - 11:06am

Very Well Done, Maria. I love the way you gave the character...


such a real voice - I wondered if his ability to think made a part of his cloning error.

You did great with this one!

Wendy

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Fri, 11-09-2001 - 11:09am

Hee hee! I loved the little conspiracy here! This was very cute, Mac. (n/t)


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Fri, 11-09-2001 - 11:11am

Your descriptions are so vivid and true - yet so lyrical, too. Great job, Linda! (n/t)


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Sat, 11-10-2001 - 11:29am

Hiya Wendy


The child was a cloning error because his fingers were an eighth of an inch too short. I didn't include it because it sounds so mean!

thanks for reading and the feedback

maria

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Sat, 11-10-2001 - 11:04pm

Thanks Wendy....glad you liked it! (nt)