TINY TUESDAY (m)

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Tue, 11-13-2001 - 9:44am

TINY TUESDAY (m)


In week two of our writing with our senses, let's write a scene or short story that concentrates on hearing/ears.

Does this sound like fun?

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Thu, 11-15-2001 - 11:33am

Good Read, Maria! ...(m)


You definitely got my hormones revved up! Sammi

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Thu, 11-15-2001 - 11:39am

Good, Suspenceful Read, Linda! Good Ending, LOL n/t


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Thu, 11-15-2001 - 11:46am

Very Touching, Very Nice ...(n/t)


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anonymous user
Thu, 11-15-2001 - 11:54am

Oh, I Agree, Very Chilling ...(m)


...and you're right, I thinks sometimes these things write themselves. I thought you captured Kerry's fear very well, through the sensory of hearing. I did find some of your sentences a bit rough, but I think you'll see these in your rewrite. And I do hope you rewrite this, and possibly expand it, you've got a good piece started here. Thanks for sharing this, Sammi

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Thu, 11-15-2001 - 6:35pm

Thanks Thia, Maria & Sammi (nt)


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Fri, 11-16-2001 - 11:14am

Thanks Sammi....you brightened my day n/t


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