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| Tue, 11-13-2001 - 9:44am |
TINY TUESDAY (m)
In week two of our writing with our senses, let's write a scene or short story that concentrates on hearing/ears.
Does this sound like fun?
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Good Read, Maria! ...(m)
You definitely got my hormones revved up! Sammi
Good, Suspenceful Read, Linda! Good Ending, LOL n/t
Very Touching, Very Nice ...(n/t)
Oh, I Agree, Very Chilling ...(m)
...and you're right, I thinks sometimes these things write themselves. I thought you captured Kerry's fear very well, through the sensory of hearing. I did find some of your sentences a bit rough, but I think you'll see these in your rewrite. And I do hope you rewrite this, and possibly expand it, you've got a good piece started here. Thanks for sharing this, Sammi
Thanks Thia, Maria & Sammi (nt)
Thanks Sammi....you brightened my day n/t
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