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| Tue, 12-04-2001 - 9:44am |
TINY TUESDAY (m)
In rounding up the writing with our senses series, let's write a scene or short story that concentrates on touch/skin.
Happy writing,
Mac

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Thank you (and I can guess why you chose to do it only once!) (n/t)
You touched my emotions.....(m)
Great story Mac, but ohhhhh its so sad!
I wanted to read more, the descriptions were vivid and you delivered a powerful punch in such a short story.
Great job!!
Maria
What fun.......Great story.....I love your style n/t
Thanks (m)
Hey Mac, Thanks for these exercises, they have made me more aware of the senses and have improved my writing. I tried to include all of the senses in this story but I forgot, he needed to chew gum or bite his lip.
Thanks again for reading and for the critique
Maria
Thanks (m)
Hey eyewrite, I also love your clever, member name. Thanks for reading and for the critique.
Maria
Oh, I couldn't resist... (m)
For fun, and with no editing, I thought I'd write a quickie (no pun intended!).
Thanks for reading! Kat
I agree with Mac, short and action packed! Kudos! kat (n/t)
Ooohh weee! I started thinking I was on the wrong website! (m)
Great job! This was a fun read. The twist and the ending was just what it needed after such hot stuff. Again, good work. ~Anita
Why don't I ever have coffee breaks (m)
like that? LOL. Kat, this was so funny. You had me going there.
Wonderful TT,
Mac
Thanks so much, Eyewrite (nt)
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