TINY TUESDAY (m)

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Tue, 12-04-2001 - 9:44am

TINY TUESDAY (m)


In rounding up the writing with our senses series, let's write a scene or short story that concentrates on touch/skin.

Happy writing,

Mac

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Tue, 12-04-2001 - 6:34pm

Thank you (and I can guess why you chose to do it only once!) (n/t)


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Tue, 12-04-2001 - 7:01pm

You touched my emotions.....(m)


Great story Mac, but ohhhhh its so sad!

I wanted to read more, the descriptions were vivid and you delivered a powerful punch in such a short story.

Great job!!

Maria

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Tue, 12-04-2001 - 7:04pm

What fun.......Great story.....I love your style n/t


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Tue, 12-04-2001 - 7:09pm

Thanks (m)


Hey Mac, Thanks for these exercises, they have made me more aware of the senses and have improved my writing. I tried to include all of the senses in this story but I forgot, he needed to chew gum or bite his lip.

Thanks again for reading and for the critique

Maria

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Tue, 12-04-2001 - 7:12pm

Thanks (m)


Hey eyewrite, I also love your clever, member name. Thanks for reading and for the critique.

Maria

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Tue, 12-04-2001 - 7:51pm

Oh, I couldn't resist... (m)


For fun, and with no editing, I thought I'd write a quickie (no pun intended!).

Thanks for reading! Kat

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Tue, 12-04-2001 - 7:55pm

I agree with Mac, short and action packed! Kudos! kat (n/t)


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Tue, 12-04-2001 - 10:10pm

Ooohh weee! I started thinking I was on the wrong website! (m)


Great job! This was a fun read. The twist and the ending was just what it needed after such hot stuff. Again, good work. ~Anita

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Tue, 12-04-2001 - 10:43pm

Why don't I ever have coffee breaks (m)


like that? LOL. Kat, this was so funny. You had me going there.

Wonderful TT,

Mac

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Tue, 12-04-2001 - 10:47pm

Thanks so much, Eyewrite (nt)


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