TINY TUESDAY (m)

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Tue, 01-01-2002 - 12:15pm

TINY TUESDAY (m)


Sitting here watching the Tournament of Roses, I thought it might be fun to write a scene or short story (max of 500 words) involving a float.

Have fun,

Mac

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Fri, 01-04-2002 - 11:24am

LMAO, Mac! ...(m)


...and I agree with Ozarker, I will never look at a float the same way again! Sammi

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Fri, 01-04-2002 - 12:20pm

Thanks Maria, and answers inside ...


This piece was much longer and I had to wield my sharp editor's knife, so I cut out the part on how her she struggles to get the tanks and boxes out to her beater. I agree that part needs more explanation.

As for teens hanging out together, I was thinking this girl was the loner, stuck with the tasks nobody else wants to do, hence her interest in the calculus whiz.

I had fun describing the balloon store clerk - can you tell? :)

Glad you liked it... and thanks for your feedback. Amazing what another pair of eyes see that we, as writers, don't notice.

Eyewrite

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anonymous user
Fri, 01-04-2002 - 12:28pm

Thank you, glad you liked it! (n/t)


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Registered: 03-25-2003
Fri, 01-04-2002 - 9:18pm

Thanks Sammi...glad you enjoyed it! (nt)


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