TINY TUESDAY...(m)

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Mon, 02-04-2002 - 11:38pm

TINY TUESDAY...(m)


For this week's Tiny Tuesday, try this: Write a short-short, 500 words or less, with these three words, in the order I give them.

aim

babble

cabana (like a small cabin/bathhouse)

Have fun, Sammi

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Wed, 02-06-2002 - 8:48am

I like it Jade....good job ! n/t


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Wed, 02-06-2002 - 9:22am

thats good Sammi I like it...*m*


I really like "I didn't aim to shoot that low-down-two- timing-double-dealing-cheating louse!" part. You did a great job. I was starting to feel bad for Miss Maisy, but She got him in the long run.

WTG, Jade

Have a mystical day,

Jade

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Wed, 02-06-2002 - 9:32am

oh my!!! (M)


So you are telling me that I have about 25 years to got to get the sexy men down? Oh you crack me up!!!

Jade

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Jade

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Wed, 02-06-2002 - 9:33am

Smash it quick! (m)


I'm sure glad that your character took care of that bugger.lol

I found your story to be very creative, well-written with lots of great descriptions. I didn't see anything to critique and believe me I was a looking LOL

Great job

Maria

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Wed, 02-06-2002 - 9:39am

I love it (m)


Mac, how is it that our two minds seem to be on the same wavelength? LOL

I really enjoyed this, the characters, dialogue and scenes and of course, the maybe romance ;)

good writing

Maria

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Wed, 02-06-2002 - 9:43am

Wow Wendy....great story full of suspense and intrique n/t


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Wed, 02-06-2002 - 9:46am

Welcome......I like this ......good job n/t


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Wed, 02-06-2002 - 9:52am

Mmmm, I wouldn't mind that job.....Great story..... n/t


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Wed, 02-06-2002 - 9:59am

Oh thank goodness (m)


they survived! I was with your character in that plane. I too would like to know more about her.

vivid descriptions and well-written as usual ;)

loved it....maria

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Wed, 02-06-2002 - 10:07am

I could picture (m)


the whole scene, the bullet and all!

Interesting characters, great dialogue, vivid descriptions and enjoyable plot equals....excellent

Maria

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