TINY TUESDAY...(m)
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TINY TUESDAY...(m)
| Tue, 02-12-2002 - 9:40am |
TINY TUESDAY...(m)
This week for the Tiny Tuesday let's try an exercise with voice and since Valentine's Day is just two days away, let's throw in the 'romance genre' just for fun. So try this: Insert this sentence into your piece anywhere you like.
"I watched as her lips parted and a soft sigh escaped as she anticipated my kiss."
Have fun, Sammi

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Too funny eyewrite (m)
I like the voice in this piece. I was with your character the whole way, her fustration but determination to write something.
Your blah turned into a creative, good story!
Maria
Great Job... I love her additude!! Keep up the great job. *nt*
Have a mystical day,
Jade
Please Pray and Support O
California Day Dreamin' sssszzzzzzzzzzzz! (look out, girls)
Crap! I’m always late. I need the entire world to set their clocks ten minutes ahead of mine, and then I’d always be right on time.
Racing, no speeding down the I-15 to my massage appointment, the temperature a balmy 82 degrees in the middle of February, no less. My sun roof open to the Southern California sun tanning me by the second, and Sting devouring my Bose speakers as he sings “Brand New Day,” I slide up next to a pea-green MGB Roadster, its top down. There in the drivers seat is the most gorgeous male I’ve seen since 1992. Mr. 1992 was the Sports Writer for our local newspaper; I was the queen of classified ad sales, we had instant, undeniable lust for one another. The entire reporters dock reek of our desire. But that’s another story.
Right now, all I care about is Mr. Roadster. I have this thing for men with long hair. Mind you, they have to be the RIGHT kind of man to have long hair, and Mr. Roadster is THAT kind of man. Take your classic Marlboro Man, you know the guy, tie a multi-color bandana around his shoulder length brunette sun-kissed locks, tan his skin to perfection, place a thick “God, put that between my thighs” mustache on his upper lip, and some cool 1980’s tortoise shell Ray Ban sun glasses on him, and now you’ve got the perfect picture of Mr. Roadster gliding alongside my car.
He looks over to see who is hovering so close to him at cruising speed, and I flash him the sweetest “Come get it smile” I can. He does a double take, and then connects. We do the SO CAL dosie doe for about two more miles until he gives me the 10,000-mile Up Club jigger sign. That’s a cupped hand lookin’ like its holdin’ dice, a quick pump lookin’ like (well, you know) and a cocked thumb thrust for the next off ramp. “Come to mama,” I say to the open sky.
We pull off the freeway, my 2000 Maxima holding tight to his tail end, as he leads me to Balboa Park. He pulls into a picnic parking area, I park alongside him. Slipping a peppermint Altoid into my mouth, I ease out of my car as he hops over the driver’s door of his MGB. We meet around the rear of his car, and…
"I watched as her lips parted and a soft sigh escaped as she anticipated my kiss. "
“Lisa, Lisa..LISA?”
“What?”
“Could you roll over? I’m ready to massage the front side of you body.”
“Oh…sorry Sherri, boy was I gone.”
Boy was she ever!!! ...
What a wonderful piece. I loved your characters. I really felt connected to them. Ok I think I need to find my Hubby now. Thanks for such a wonderful story.
Jade
Have a mystical day,
Jade
Please Pray and Support O
Heheheh, nice work sammi (pant, pant!!!)(nt)
cl-ozarker
"We are all apprentices in a craft where no one ever becomes a master." - Ernest Heminway
Mercy me, Maude. Where's m' fan?(nt)
cl-ozarker
"We are all apprentices in a craft where no one ever becomes a master." - Ernest Heminway
Very wily Miss Heather! Nice work.(nt)
cl-ozarker
"We are all apprentices in a craft where no one ever becomes a master." - Ernest Heminway
Funny, funny, mac. Always wondered about those celluloid love scenes.(nt)
cl-ozarker
"We are all apprentices in a craft where no one ever becomes a master." - Ernest Heminway
FOCL eyewrite. My kind of romance story!(nt)
cl-ozarker
"We are all apprentices in a craft where no one ever becomes a master." - Ernest Heminway
Nice work maria. Sexy ending there.(nt)
cl-ozarker
"We are all apprentices in a craft where no one ever becomes a master." - Ernest Heminway
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