TINY TUESDAY...(m)

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Tue, 02-12-2002 - 9:40am

TINY TUESDAY...(m)


This week for the Tiny Tuesday let's try an exercise with voice and since Valentine's Day is just two days away, let's throw in the 'romance genre' just for fun. So try this: Insert this sentence into your piece anywhere you like.

"I watched as her lips parted and a soft sigh escaped as she anticipated my kiss."

Have fun, Sammi

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Wed, 02-13-2002 - 11:08am

LOL kay, I loved this story. Too funny!(nt)


cl-ozarker

"We are all apprentices in a craft where no one ever becomes a master." - Ernest Heminway

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Wed, 02-13-2002 - 11:36am

Indeed you did!!! (m)


Maria, I really enjoyed your TTE. The picture of Colton’s regaining control of the hose cracked me up. BTW, he seemed a ultra-sexpot with that muscular chest. You did a great job with this exercise, especially the paragraph where presses her body against the truck. Whew!

Mac

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Wed, 02-13-2002 - 11:42am

Muchos Voice here...


And you were telling me about the voice in my piece? Kat from Sandy Eggo has got voice!

The guy in the roadster sounds like Burt Renoylds/Tom Selleck (from the mustache reference). And why is it we're always running late to yoga or massage classes - getting stressed trying to get to a class designed to de-stress us. My my.

Fantastic work, here. Go get another massage ;)

Eyewrite

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Wed, 02-13-2002 - 11:44am

Innuendo, innuendo...


soapy water, high pressure hose, soaking, oh my my this is getting HOT!

You notice that none of us mentioned the awkward shuffling for "protection" in our steamy scenes ;)

Have a good day, Eyewrite

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Wed, 02-13-2002 - 11:50am

I loved it!!! (m)


Kat, your TTE was filled with so many great lines. Now I’ll be asking myself is that “God, put that between my thighs” mustache or not-LOL. I loved the “come to mama” comment and pictured her pulling her car off the road behind his. Fantastic!

Mac

PS...great title. It was a good clue to what the story was about!

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Wed, 02-13-2002 - 11:54am

What can I say? I always try (m)


I appreciate your kind words. Thanks again for the challenge!

Mac

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Wed, 02-13-2002 - 12:14pm

I might have been teasing (m)


with the striptease-LOL. If I had to write one, it would turn out like Jamie Lee Curtis’ in True Lies. Do you remember that scene? I died laughing when I first saw it. A classic!

Mac

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Wed, 02-13-2002 - 12:21pm

Thanks a bunch (m)


I might put this one in the "idea box" and develop it later or stick it in a story I'm working on.

Thanks Heather!

Mac

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Wed, 02-13-2002 - 12:26pm

hehehe...thanks Jade!!! (nt)


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Wed, 02-13-2002 - 3:36pm

Lilly's lilac's are lookin' for some luscious...whew, Sammi! (n/t)


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