TINY TUESDAY...(m)

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Tue, 02-12-2002 - 9:40am

TINY TUESDAY...(m)


This week for the Tiny Tuesday let's try an exercise with voice and since Valentine's Day is just two days away, let's throw in the 'romance genre' just for fun. So try this: Insert this sentence into your piece anywhere you like.

"I watched as her lips parted and a soft sigh escaped as she anticipated my kiss."

Have fun, Sammi

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Wed, 02-13-2002 - 3:40pm

Wow-zer, hold on to your hats boys and girls! Pretty fun read, Jade! (n/t)


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Wed, 02-13-2002 - 3:42pm

Big "T" a sophisticated dude, hummm, and he had long hair... *wink* (n/t)


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Wed, 02-13-2002 - 3:44pm

Don't know about buttah in my writing...


but there's some buttah on my thighs, lol.

Here's hoping a dashing bloke can assist you when you need CPR or Artificial Respiration.

Thank you for your compliment. I'm glowing :)

Eyewrite

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Wed, 02-13-2002 - 3:45pm

Girlfriend...


This had pun all over it! *wink*

Great idea for this exercise.

Too fun, kat

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Wed, 02-13-2002 - 3:46pm

Thanks, Mac...


and ever since I heard the phrase "rumpy bumpy" I've been looking for a place to use it, lol.

Watch out for granny's erotica!

Thanks for your comments and compliments, Mac. Always makes me happy :)

Happy writing, Eyewrite

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Wed, 02-13-2002 - 3:48pm

Thanks, Jade...


yes that start-stop-delete-try again plagues us all, hey, lol. And those horses are gorgeous and so powerful.

Thanks for reading, Eyewrite

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Wed, 02-13-2002 - 3:48pm

Maybe we should all move on over to the Romance Board, holy cow! (n/t)


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Wed, 02-13-2002 - 3:48pm

Thanks, Kat! (nt)


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Wed, 02-13-2002 - 3:49pm

Thanks, Maria. Sometimes we're lucky. (nt)


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Wed, 02-13-2002 - 3:50pm

Thanks, Linda. This is romance for the non-romantics. (nt)


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