TINY TUESDAY...(m)

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Mon, 02-18-2002 - 9:50pm

TINY TUESDAY...(m)


I would like to try something just for fun and to go along with something we discussed last week in chat about dialog and its uses in the 'show versus telling' of a story. So, here's this weeks Tiny Tuesday: Write a short piece using strictly dialog to show all aspects of the story, especially action. Have fun with this, Sammi

P.S. I will be gone for the next two or three days, so I will post mine and respond to others then. Sorry about this inconvenience.

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Thu, 02-21-2002 - 5:29pm

Funny, Patty!...(m)


LMAO! I was one of the lucky women who had to have labor stopped with, of all things, asthma medicine. Even though this story is on the other end of that spectrum, I can relate. Your sound effects are right on. Good job, Sammi

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Thu, 02-21-2002 - 5:36pm

Jim is Jake, Jake is Jim?...(m)


Boy, you really kept us on our toes with this one. Good work, Sammi

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Thu, 02-21-2002 - 5:41pm

More, More...(m)


I'd like to read more about this woman, and her circumstances. You do plan to expand this, right? Sammi

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Thu, 02-21-2002 - 5:46pm

Good...(m)


...read, thanks for sharing. Sammi

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Thu, 02-21-2002 - 5:49pm

Too Funny...(m)


Ten minutes so he could go play his game? Classic. I enjoyed this, Sammi

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Thu, 02-21-2002 - 8:19pm

Oh that funny... WTG Kat ...you keep us laughin in the alleys!


Have a mystical day,

Jade

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Thu, 02-21-2002 - 9:36pm

Though I never said, it was (m)


self-defense. You know how most abused women start thinking they deserve to be beaten (sick as it seems)? That was the way she felt. She knew she'd killed him before he killed her but she still she had mixed emotions.

Thanks a lot,

Mac

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Thu, 02-21-2002 - 9:42pm

I didn't have any plans to but (m)


I probably will expand it. Thanks for the encouragement, Sammi!

Mac

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