TINY TUESDAY

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Tue, 03-05-2002 - 6:17am

TINY TUESDAY


For this week's Tiny Tuesday, let's try an exercise in describing 'setting.' So here goes: Insert this sentence into your piece, "Here's your change, sir." And describe the surroundings. Have fun, Sammi

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Tue, 03-05-2002 - 6:17pm

Good story Michelle, I liked the suspense (m)


and you did a good job with the setting.

Heather

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Tue, 03-05-2002 - 6:19pm

Great job! And thanks a lot, now I'm hungry for Chinese. lol nt


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Tue, 03-05-2002 - 6:23pm

great story! At first I wasn't sure where he was


other than in his junk-filled car. Great description of the car.

Heather

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Tue, 03-05-2002 - 6:31pm

great Job!!! *nt*


Have a mystical day,

Jade

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Tue, 03-05-2002 - 6:34pm

oh my poor guy. The dog sounded like one of mine! Great job!!!! *nt*


Have a mystical day,

Jade

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Tue, 03-05-2002 - 8:49pm

Cool, Jade (m)


I hope we get to hear about this gentleman’s life in a future story. You’ve got me curious!!! I’m also hooked on your main character. I admire her carefree attitude and couldn’t help for singing, “Take this job and shove it. I ain’t workin’ here no more.” LOL

WTG with the setting. Excellnt job!

Mac

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Tue, 03-05-2002 - 8:49pm

Cute, Jade...(m)


...you did well with this exercise. I enjoyed reading this, your descriptions were clear and I love it that she found time for a senior citizen. Sammi

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Tue, 03-05-2002 - 8:50pm

I vote that he dump Brittany (m)


And start dating the cute brunette at the antique shop!!! Now that you’ve hooked us with “…determined to meet this woman again” I can’t wait to read the rest.

Mac

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Tue, 03-05-2002 - 8:52pm

Give me a tissue (m)


That was so sweet, I feared you were leading us up to him rejecting the idea of the baby. I definitely enjoyed it, Michelle!

Mac

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Tue, 03-05-2002 - 8:53pm

Cute Story, Tank...n/t