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| Tue, 03-05-2002 - 6:17am |
TINY TUESDAY
For this week's Tiny Tuesday, let's try an exercise in describing 'setting.' So here goes: Insert this sentence into your piece, "Here's your change, sir." And describe the surroundings. Have fun, Sammi

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Pass the chopsticks, please (m)
What a delicious choice for this exercise! I envisioned Donald Duk’s quite well. Good job!
Mac
Hehehe…can’t say it has (m)
But I sure enjoyed reading about it happening to poor Frank. This was such a funny story and your setting couldn’t have been clearer. Were they waiting for the ferry? I hope Frank and Bruno show up again. I liked them!!!
Mac
Hunan's, Here I Come...(m)
...good descriptions, Portrait. I too am hungry for Chinese food now. LOL. Sammi
Hey, Eyewrite....(m)
This hasn't happened to me, but I have met people that their cars are this messy. Good detail, Sammi
Thanks Everybody! n/t
Thanks for reading, everyone...
Frank was at a toll booth for a ferry and was scrambling a certain amount to scrape up the cash for the trip. Bruno wasn't helping find the wallet, he was in play mode, lol.
I spent the weekend in a messy vehicle, hence the setting ;-)
Take care,
Eyewrite
Ah, fast food while on a road trip. Nice story! (nt)
Like the story, Sammi. Whiff of future romance? (nt)
Whew, glad he likes the news. Vivid scene description, well done. (nt)
Great voice! The only thing...
I didn't like about the story was it ended too soon! Make it longer, and repost? Please?
Great job, great piece.
Eyewrite
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