TINY TUESDAY

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Tue, 03-05-2002 - 6:17am

TINY TUESDAY


For this week's Tiny Tuesday, let's try an exercise in describing 'setting.' So here goes: Insert this sentence into your piece, "Here's your change, sir." And describe the surroundings. Have fun, Sammi

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Tue, 03-05-2002 - 11:05pm

My TT: Same Time Next Week, Sir? (m)


Don't ask me where this idea came from!!! I swear I'm not a weirdo-LOL.

Mac

* * *

I survey the room, taking in the outdated curtains and bed whose headboard was attached to the wall. Even though I would’ve preferred something nicer, I think whatever turns him on works for me. As I make my way towards the bathroom, I say, “I’ll just be a minute.”

The door creaks shut and with a little force, it closes. Plopping my purse onto the pink porcelain sink that matches the pink and green checkered-tiled wall, I dig through my purse until I find a lighter. I take my time smoking my cigarette. From our past experience, he usually needs a few minutes alone to get ready for me. Possibly to excite himself.

Holding the cigarette between my painted-red lips, I unbutton the blouse that covers my black-knit bodysuit and remove it, and then the tight fitting clothing underneath. I pause for a moment looking into the mirror splattered with the last resident’s toothpaste that the maid failed to wash off. I reach behind me to undo my bra, but decide to unzip the tit covers instead. I determine to keep on my thong panties as well, remembering the last time we’d been together and how he’d expressed his desire to undress me.

I crush the cigarette into the glass ashtray that displays the motel’s name and check the time by the watch in my purse. Opening the door, his naked back faces me. He’s looking out the window at the city below.

“You ready for me?”

He turns in my direction and walks forward, his eyes shift to the dresser opposite the bed. After making note of the contents -- laid out in three neat piles -- on the dresser, I join him at the bed and take the book from him. As I open it to the page he’d marked, he runs his hand up the inside of my thigh, and then pulls my burgundy stiletto up onto the bed. His unfastening the buckle doesn’t affect me; I begin to read.

“She had been a good mother, even if she had held him close to her bosom long after he’d passed adolescence,” I say.

He drops my shoe on the floor and then proceeds to remove the other one before pulling me onto the polyester bedspread.

I clutch the paperback in my hand as I climb on top of him. “He liked their time to-geh-together,” I whisper, stuttering as his tongue meets my exposed nipple. “He longed for the day his father’s ship would set sail. Permanently!”

Within seconds, his pager goes off; he pushes me aside. I watch his expression turn to a frown as he reads the message. “I’m sorry. I have to go,” he says.

I see him dress quickly as I make my way to the dresser. I fumble with the bills and hand him a ten-dollar bill. “Here’s your change, sir.”

“I’ll see you next week,” he says, walking out the door.

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Wed, 03-06-2002 - 1:05am

Different fetishes for some folks...


When the dresser contents were lined up in three piles and she began to read, I thought it would be from the Gideon Bible, lol. That fellow has a fetish, all right.

Once, in Hawaii, I read a bit of a book on Buddhism that I found in the bedside table, right beside the Gideon's Bible.

I find it fascinating how we can take the writing prompt in so many directions. Smooth writing, Mac.

Take care, Eyewrite

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Wed, 03-06-2002 - 9:27am

Very......(m)


interesting Mac. Different and very unique. Good job.

I really think you must have been hanging around my friend Katin to much. This sounded like something she would write.

A job very well done Mac! You always surprize me.

Jade

Have a mystical day,

Jade

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Wed, 03-06-2002 - 10:28am

TJ and the Hooker...(m)


...who would've thought of this story coming out of such a dull sentence? LOL. But I liked it and especially enjoyed that she was an honest hooker. Go figure. Sammi

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Wed, 03-06-2002 - 10:56pm

Now that would’ve been (m)


quite a fetish, a hooker reading from the Bible. A religious freak who picks up hookers sounds like a tale from the life of Jim Baker, or was that the church secretary? LOL

Thanks, eyewrite, for your comments.

Mac

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Wed, 03-06-2002 - 11:01pm

Thanks, Jade (m)


Tell your friend to come join us (unless Katin is Kat that posts here already).

You're such a wonderful member to have. Thanks for reading all of our stories and giving us feedback!

Hugs,

Mac

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Wed, 03-06-2002 - 11:04pm

What's the saying??? (m)


There's nothing like a honest hooker! LOL. Thanks for the writing prompt. Dull or not, I liked the ideas it sparked.

Mac

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Thu, 03-07-2002 - 9:20pm

Nice jade. (m)


You did a nice job of describing McD's -- the smell of coffee, etc. And I liked your elderly gentleman. Very courtly.

Linda

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Thu, 03-07-2002 - 9:27pm

Heheheh, I second mac's vote. Nice work sammi.(nt)


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Thu, 03-07-2002 - 9:36pm

Liked this a lot michelle.(m)


It had a lot of tension and a wonderful ending.

Linda