Saturday's Surprise: Open The Envelop...

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Sat, 03-09-2002 - 11:45am

Saturday's Surprise: Open The Envelope (m)


Write a short story (1,000 words or less) where the main character has the nickname you were given during Thursday’s Field Trip (if you didn’t take the trip here’s the link http://pages.prodigy.net/mlemus/mafiaweb.htm).

Happy writing,

Mac

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Mon, 03-11-2002 - 9:14pm

Glad you liked it, hope you didn't hurt yourself, Cedar Teeth! (nt)


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Mon, 03-11-2002 - 10:27pm

How creative (m)


And what a hoot! I love it and if ever the game comes out, I'll buy a dozen.

I loved playing monopoly as a young(ster)so this brought back lots of memories.

Fabulous, Excellent job Eyewrite...keep those creative wheels turning!!!

Maria

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Mon, 03-11-2002 - 10:31pm

Thanks Linda for reading and the comments n/t


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Mon, 03-11-2002 - 10:33pm

Thanks, Maria...


As I told Mac, I have no idea where all this came from. Ever since the exercise was posted I had no ideas whatsoever.

I fondly remember marathon Monopoly games, or games where I yelled at my boyfriend for trying to rip off my grammy. Then there were marathon gin rummy games, and marathon...

Thank you for your kind words, Maria, glad you liked it.

Take care,

Eyewrite

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Mon, 03-11-2002 - 10:35pm

Thanks Sammi for reading and the comments n/t


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Tue, 03-12-2002 - 7:38am

Interesting...(m)


Jade, I think this would make for an interesting novel. If you decide to lengthen this as you start your rewrite, I have two things to suggest: Use your spell check first before posting, and check your tense. IE: "Casey STARTED to load the... He NOTICES a book on the highest shelf..."

You definitely got me hooked with Casey and the ghost aspect of this. I enjoyed reading this and WANT MORE! Sammi

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Tue, 03-12-2002 - 7:48am

Cute!...(m)


Very creative, EW. I enjoyed reading this. Sammi

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Tue, 03-12-2002 - 9:31am

Thank you Sammi, glad you liked it! (nt)


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