English paper :-)

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Registered: 08-25-2004
English paper :-)
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Wed, 10-06-2010 - 8:31pm

Well....idk whats up with the new board but HEY everyone! I am taking an English class for school and we are supposed to pick a topic we have to write about for the next 5 WEEKS! Guess what I picked?? Oh yes.....circumcision. I get to "get the word out" to my entire class and to the professor! They have to see my facts, evidence and plain 'ol common sence posts for the next 5 weeks of how wrong circumsision is. ha ha ha ha ha!! AWESOME! Wish me luck :-)

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Registered: 08-07-2008
Wed, 10-06-2010 - 11:19pm

Good luck, if you need any thing let us know. And I hope you'll tell us how it goes. :)

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Registered: 08-25-2004
Thu, 10-07-2010 - 12:36pm

How does this sound as a Thesis Statement??

Raising awareness against the unnecessary surgical procedure of Routine Infant Circumcision will show the physical and psychological effects on the individual, the effects it has on society and also the Ethical dilemmas that are breached.

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Registered: 07-25-2007
Thu, 10-07-2010 - 12:39pm
GL!

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Registered: 03-15-2005
Thu, 10-07-2010 - 7:30pm
Good luck with your paper! Let us know if you need any help along the way!

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iVillage Member
Registered: 08-25-2004
Fri, 10-08-2010 - 6:56pm

Fraaaaaaank! Where are you? I need help :-)


Any one remember the specific names or cases of infants/children that have had extensive damage during a circ and were forced to live as a female and also any names or cases of infants/children that have died because of this procedure?

Any help would be great! Thanks!

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Registered: 08-07-2008
Sat, 10-09-2010 - 12:09am
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Registered: 08-25-2004
Sun, 10-17-2010 - 4:33pm

Thats perfect! Thank you very much!

P.S. I got an "A" on my first paper :-)

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Registered: 03-15-2005
Sun, 10-17-2010 - 10:01pm
Congrats!

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iVillage Member
Registered: 08-25-2004
Sun, 10-31-2010 - 8:48pm

HA HA! SUCCESS!!

Here is a response from one of my class mates:

"Hi Amanda. Reading your paper and this DB,
iVillage Member
Registered: 03-15-2005
Mon, 11-01-2010 - 11:15am
So great to hear about the changed mind! Education truly does make a difference!

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