How's this letter to the principal?

iVillage Member
Registered: 09-13-2006
How's this letter to the principal?
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Thu, 09-21-2006 - 2:01pm

I'm really awful at writing letters.

iVillage Member
Registered: 04-11-2003
Thu, 09-21-2006 - 2:20pm

I think it sounds good. I liked that you actualy suggested a solution instead of just stating the problem. The one thing I might change is combine the second and third sentence: I have spent a small amount of time on the kindergarten playground, and I am worried that there are not enough adults who are actually watching the children and willing to intervene when necessary.

Good Job

Samantha

Samantha