Another newbie!


Hello! I am new to the writing group but am anxious to jump right in! Here's the first page of a short story I am working on. Any suggestions in relation to this week's exercise would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!

Untitled short story--

“Don’t let me die”! “Don’t let me die”! “Don’t let me die”!


Dec. Exercise - Christmas on Isabella St. by Marcia


Jumping in with a question


Hello out there --

I have been hanging out on the writing life board, but have not yet ventured further. I am looking for a bit of a critique on a kids' story that I am working on. Is 'dis the place? Or should I be joining a class? Unfortunately most of the chats happen during prime homework time and my daughter has dibs on the computer many, many evenings. Do I have any alternatives?

Thanks for any help.

Suzanne


New to this board


Eros and Anguish


Dec. writing exercise... I'm new too


Here are a few beginnings (some short, one long)... enjoy!

BEGINNING #1 I talked with my Uncle Dom for three hours on the phone last night, which was nice. I haven’t spoken to him since I was ten, when he died in a construction crane accident on 34th Street. What’s really weird is that after all these years, I’d forgotten he had a lisp.


December writing exercise- I'm new here


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