Please review and comment on my first attempt at writing


GIRLS NIGHT OUT

Marie Francois Mfrancois@miami.edu


October Exercise -- Short Story


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October Writing Exercise


Gaynord and the Magic Harpsichord

A long, long time ago a wandering musician strolled down the roads of the English countryside. Upon first sight, many mistook the slim, young musician for a lad, but she was indeed a young maiden. She carried a small harpsichord on her back and would stop in towns to play for food and lodging before continuing on her journey.

One day she approached a small village and decided to stop for the night. As she drew near to the heart of town, a loud and burly townsman stopped her.


Well Everybody asked for it so here it is. There is no title yet and I may do more on it later. Enjoy!


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My October Writing Exercise


I've got a tale for you, one that should be taught to every child over the age of two. The minute they start grabbing at stuff that isn't theirs, you tell them how I taught Cassandra a lesson. See if they don't run from the room, vowing to be good.


Short Story: The Answer Is In Your Heart


Writing from the Heart


Are the participants familiar with the book, Writing from the Heart, by Nancy Slonim Aronie? I have taken her writing workshop in Chilmark, MA (on Martha's Vineyard island) several times. It is marvelous. For more details, I can give you a contact. The address is: 1 West Meadow, Chilmark, MA 02535.


"A Writer in Each of Us" Chat Thursday night at 10 pm ET - iVillage Special Events Chat Room. DON'T FORGET!


Apologies Given


Hi All,

Just wanted to say "Sorry" for the above mess I created with all of the incorrect posts. And I thought a first impresssion was awkward face to face :::kicking toes in the dirt and blushing::: I'll try to contain my excitement a little better the next time.

Lynn

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