Introducing myself and my writing exercise


Jambalaya - January Exercise


“Me-oh-my-oh, me gotta go la la la la down the bayou,”

Sara whirled around the kitchen, washrag in hand. It was her turn to clean up, and she found that blasting some of her favorite music made the work go faster.


Update to my first story - with the "why" added!.........(m)


Part # 1 Repost (Long)


<>

;-)

Part One

" I can take care of myself, thank you. "

Blurry and unfocused, the solid oak casket gleamed like gold in the hot August sun. Charity simply stared ahead, with no thought to what the preacher was saying, and no thought for the people around her.

'Who is he, anyway? He doesn't even know Papa.' She thought. She gripped her cramping stomach, and squelched her guilt at feeling hunger at a time like this.


Getting Started Excercise - Childhood Home


New to board & writing. Thought I'd try the exercise!.............(m)


when do you tell ur child your dating


Confusing grammar question


Hello. I am confused about how to construct clauses indicating possibility. English is my second language and I experience great difficulty sometimes. Spanish seems easier (*smile*). My problem is how to correctly use clauses containing "as if".

I think that I have the two examples below correct.

1. It *was* as if she *had* just fallen asleep.

2. Is *was* as if she *had been* asleep for just a few minutes.


Untitled



The notes of Humanity.........January exercise..............

Pages