October exercise- (not so great) childhood memories
September Exercise: Crystal Clear
Question on moving from fact to fiction
October Excercise..............Essence of a Lady
Just a little something, looking for opinions/ critique ect on (more)
Not sure if it is OK to post stuff that isn't the monthly exercise, if not, just let me know, and where I can post it.
Autumn Falling
The trees are changing. They are trading in their bright green frocks for the jewel-toned garments of fall, just as they have done every autumn before this. They don't seem to realize that the world has come to a stop. My world has ended.
An experiment in terror (m)
During chat this week I mentioned that I had a rough first draft for this month's exercise. I never promised time for rewrites (we've got all the time in the world, don't we?) but a few were interested.
What say we use my first draft for this month as a lesson? You teach me!
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Kentucky Blue
My brother would not mow the lawn. Poor Dad, bad heart and all, hauled the lawn mower from its corner of the garage. Dad started in the back yard, overestimating his strength.
October Exercise: The best laid plans
Reminder! (m)
I know we all live busy lives in one way or another, but I'd like to suggest we stay strong not only with our writing, but our feedback too.
Curious me scrolled down to #2 and read "Midnight Sun." It's awesome! This writer may not expect more feedback (last one to post a response was dated October 9th). All I ended up posting to her today was "Awesome! (n/t)" I thought she would appreciate knowing her audience grew by one.
while listening to music; collisions;
Sitting here and musing, wondering, so strange. Im a loose thing, on a mile. Feeling so strange, as I bitch and I moan. In a hotel, thinking of this, I should have known... I know. It makes no sense.
Hello.......
I will be taking a writing exam on next Saturday and was wondering is there a site where I can practice? I need to be able to write something and have it checked online. Or maybe a site where it gives me a paragraph or sentences to correct. I need practice before this test. Thanks.
